Hey, new poem, new format, bigger words. well, I'm trying out some new stuff. so tell me what you think about it!
The fathomless depth that precedes between us,
Though we are distanced so near you seem,
But you were here first,
Your existence come into view long before I had been.
You are the tears of the night,
Flaring into life before millions of years,
Sparking off a dark intuition for a wild flight,
Your everlasting brilliance dissipates my fears.
Leading me nearer,
To a subtle adventure,
Your magnificence makes me feel inferior,
Take me up to your high dominance and help my fly further.
The forerunner of a galaxy,
The eternal lights to guide the lost,
Shooting past the atmosphere blazing,
Giving hope against the frost.
When my time comes and goes,
Here you will be till the end,
Let me gaze unto thee before I face these foes,
Through me let your impregnability be lent.
2 comments:
gosh..i dont know what it is..but i WANT THAT LIGHT!! it sounds so damned blissful and peaceful! =S good job on this one. I WANT THAT LIGHT!!
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